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Blog EntryPergiJun 14, '07 11:15 PM
for everyone

Pergi


Aku pergi menulis
kamu lambaikan tangan
bilang,"Selamat jalan,
hatihati ya!"

Padahal aku pergi
ke dalam ruang sepi
hatimu

Suatu saat kalau kau
sudah sadar, kau pasti
akan bilang,"Selamat
datang, kau betah
di sini kan sayang?"


Epri Tsaqib, 2007

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tototapalnise wrote on Jun 14, '07
Betah ??? kepaksa :))
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 14, '07
hehehe...memang betah kok ^_^
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dinginbayu wrote on Jun 14, '07
mau pergi kemana???
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 14, '07
ke dalam ruang sepi hatimu :D
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hanyasendu wrote on Jun 15, '07
waduh...hatiku sudah terisi..
hingga ruangnya tak lagi sepi
:D
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noneage19 wrote on Jun 15, '07
aku tak akan pergi karena Tuhan sudah disini...
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gerimis wrote on Jun 15, '07
terkesan terpatah-patah saat membacanya ya
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
hanyasendu said
waduh...hatiku sudah terisi..
hingga ruangnya tak lagi sepi
:D
alhamdulillah....lagi ada lomba 17-san ya? :D
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
noneage19 said
aku tak akan pergi karena Tuhan sudah disini...
aku pergi ke rumahNYA barusan

sholat Jum'at :D
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
gerimis said
terkesan terpatah-patah saat membacanya ya
maksudnya gimana zu? kurang mengalir ya?
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gerimis wrote on Jun 15, '07
epriabdurrahman said
maksudnya gimana zu? kurang mengalir ya?
iya sih...
hmm mungkin itu dari persepsi ku saja kali ya
terkesan terpatah2 saat membacanya gitu
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tototapalnise wrote on Jun 15, '07
epriabdurrahman said
ke dalam ruang sepi hatimu
jangan lupa bawa petromak..biar terangan dikit...hehehehe
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
gerimis said
iya sih...
hmm mungkin itu dari persepsi ku saja kali ya
terkesan terpatah2 saat membacanya gitu
tadinya mau kubuat mirip gaya cerpen dialognya, tapi lebih asyik gini aja zu. Tx anyway for comment ^_^
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
tototapalnise said
jangan lupa bawa petromak..biar terangan dikit...hehehehe
maaf suka gelap-gelap-an, gak keliatan kalau main colongan hahaha...:D
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tototapalnise wrote on Jun 15, '07
main colongan ??? ooo pantes, banyak mangga pada ilang...ini tho yg suka nyolong...hmmmm
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gerimis wrote on Jun 15, '07
just a commet tho... welcome epri, ;D
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
tototapalnise said
main colongan ??? ooo pantes, banyak mangga pada ilang...ini tho yg suka nyolong...hmmmm
HUssss....! kan kamu yang tadahin kemarin...lupa ya? :D
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
gerimis said
just a commet tho... welcome epri, ;D
ok zu...selamat menulis
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dinginbayu wrote on Jun 15, '07
epriabdurrahman said
ke dalam ruang sepi hatimu :D
HATI-HATI MAS!!!!
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 15, '07
Siap! kalau sepi nanti tinggal cari yang rame-rame kan beres :D
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ligita wrote on Jun 15, '07
lah pergi gak ngajak-ngajak
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cintaanakyatim wrote on Jun 15, '07
zlamat jalan duhai jiwa jiwa yang merindu.......
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sondang27 wrote on Jun 17, '07
menarik...pa kabar bang dah lama kutakpernah online
internet di tempat kerja rusak terpaksa ke warnet nih
dah dua minggu rusak, duh kapan bagusnya ya?
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 18, '07
ligita said
lah pergi gak ngajak-ngajak
soalnya jalannya ke ruang sepi mbak...jadi kalau rame-rame ntar gak sepi lagi donk hehehe...
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 18, '07
cintaanakyatim said
zlamat jalan duhai jiwa jiwa yang merindu.......
Zlamat Zalan Zuga ...(ini ucapan orang MakaZZar Zampur Mezan ya?) :D
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 18, '07
sondang27 said
menarik...pa kabar bang dah lama kutakpernah online
internet
baik sondang...welcome back ya..mungkin karena kamu kebanyakan online jadi dimatiin internetnya abis jadi gak kerja2 kali :D
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esfieana wrote on Jun 30, '07
bung epri.. saya boleh taruh 'aku pergi' ke blog esfieana ya.. terimakasih.. ^^
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epriabdurrahman wrote on Jun 30, '07
boleh, tapi jangan lupa cantumkan penulisnya :)
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esfieana wrote on Jul 1, '07
terimakasih bung epri.. saya kan ingat itu.. salam manis..^^
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lily899 wrote on Aug 13
hh....bagus pisan , hmmm tks
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